CLOSED: Critique of 20 Pages + Query by Jess Silva and Luvina Jean-Charles

The double phenomes that are Jess Silva (one of my crit partners extraordinaire) and Luvina Jean-Charles are offering a two-for-one critique of 20 pages and a query from the first pages of any commercial fiction, but especially YA/MG or romance MS. Jess is one of our illustrious Lit Agent Interns of Awesome (and also a great author), and Ms. Luvina is an incredibly creative author represented by Tina Wexler.

An only slightly arbitrary picture of princesses.

This auction is open for bidding until 11:59pm, Eastern Daylight Time, April 28th, 2012.

  1. Comment on THIS BLOG POST with your bid. Bidding starts at US$1.
  2. You may, of course, bid more than once.
  3. The highest bid at 11:59pm, Eastern Daylight Time, April 28th, 2012, will win.
  4. Once the auction closes, if you are the highest bidder, I will contact you with further instructions.
  5. Please DO NOT donate, send the file, etc., unless I email you! SERIOUSLY.
  6. And…go!

About Jess:

Jessica Silva is a 23-year-old YA writer born and raised in the Seattle metropolitan area, which broadly means she enjoys coffee and nature but not at the same time. She tells stories she wishes she’d read as a growing girl (usually involves kickassery). Outside of writing, she’s a research assistant in the psychology department at the University of Washington and a remote intern for a fabulous literary agent.

 

About Luvina:

She’s an 23-year-old American YA writer living in Paris. Bright-eyed club kid turned micro-blogging expat, turned frequently anxious baby author. She writes fiction about people with problems. She likes Mexican food, horror movies and those refrigerators that let you choose between ice chips and ice cubes. Sge also like listing things in groups of three. She’s represented by International Creative Management.

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14 Responses to CLOSED: Critique of 20 Pages + Query by Jess Silva and Luvina Jean-Charles

  1. Stacey King April 27, 2012 at 9:58 am #

    $20. Sounds great!

  2. Christine April 28, 2012 at 7:41 pm #

    $35 (see caveat below).

    What a great cause to support–I can’t believe more writers aren’t snapping up this chance to get a double critique from two interesting writers!

    Caveat: my book is a mystery (for adults, but the MC is 27)—if reading mysteries isn’t your cup o’tea (saw the note requesting romance/YA/MG), I can bow out to the second-place bidder and re-bid on another critique next month. But if you two are willing/interested, I’d be game!

  3. Stacey King April 28, 2012 at 8:18 pm #

    $40

  4. Christine April 28, 2012 at 8:48 pm #

    $45 (see note above).

    Cool, a bidding war for clean water!

  5. Juli April 28, 2012 at 9:36 pm #

    50$

  6. Stacey King April 28, 2012 at 11:46 pm #

    $60

  7. Juli April 28, 2012 at 11:56 pm #

    $65

  8. Stacey King April 28, 2012 at 11:58 pm #

    $70

  9. Juli April 28, 2012 at 11:58 pm #

    71$

  10. Stacey King April 28, 2012 at 11:59 pm #

    $80

    • Stacey King April 28, 2012 at 11:59 pm #

      85

  11. Juli April 28, 2012 at 11:59 pm #

    85$

  12. Stacey King April 29, 2012 at 12:00 am #

    95

  13. Kat Brauer April 29, 2012 at 12:05 am #

    Woah, first time we’ve had a tied bid!

    $85 was the highest bid at 11:59pm. I’ll let random.org decide the winner–Stacey is 1, and Juli is 2.

    …#2 is the winner. Congratulations Juli! I’ll be contacting you soon. Thank you Stacey for participating though. You’re both awesome.

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