Archive | June 10, 2012

Water Story: Time Travel

by Rowenna Miller

Fetching water the time traveller's way.

The pump is perhaps an eighth of a mile away.

I’ve made the trek three times today already, once for a fire bucket to keep by the fire for safety, and twice for washwater. So, all tallied, I’ll have walked a mile for water when I return.

The bucket is light as I set out, just scarred metal hanging from a thin metal handle, but full it pulls at my arms. They’ll be sore tonight and screaming tomorrow, because I’m not used to this.

“Ha, don’t you have enough boys in camp to make those water runs for you?” a friend in a blue Continental uniform calls, teasing.

“They’re drilling,” I answer, smiling patiently. Perhaps I should make the guys do the heavy lifting—but I need the water now, and I can manage.

I fill the bucket at the pump—a modern pump that only asks you to lift its handle and it willingly produces clean, potable water—and try not to splash my shoes. I mostly succeed. I hoist the bucket and begin to walk back to our camp. It takes a few paces to find my balance with the sloshing bucket and I leave a sodden spot on my petticoats.

The handle digs into my hand. If I didn’t know better, I would think it was grinding directly into the bones of my fingers. Water is heavy for something you can see through–I’ve estimated that, full, the bucket weighs over thirty pounds. I try wrapping the handle in my apron, and this helps. The spot where the handle meet my skin, however, is still indented and angrily red by the time I set the bucket down next to the fire and fill a kettle to heat water to wash dishes.

And let’s keep in mind—I’m doing this for fun. Revolutionary War reenactment is my hobby, a weekend pastime, not my day-to-day life. In the end, I’m choosing to make the trek and haul that water—and it’s still a more convenient way to get water than many of my forebears enjoyed. Of course, we expect that from the world two hundred years ago—but when I return to the 21st century, I fill a glass of water from the tap and draw a piping hot bath from safe water sources. Not everyone living in this century can claim that.

I’m reminded every time I roll my sore shoulders and flex my bruised fingers.

Rowenna writes, sews, and sometimes finds herself in other centuries. Mostly she lives in the Midwest with her husband and incredibly persistent cat. They are expecting their first child this fall (though they haven’t broken the news to the cat yet). Find out more about Rowenna by following her on twitter (@rowennam), or check out her blog!

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Posted on June 10, 2012 in Memory, Photo, Water Story · Comments { 0 }

CLOSED: Critique of 1250 Words by Agent Elana Roth

Congratulations to Alexandra, Elana’s winner!
But I’ll be contacting everyone for your consolation Kat-Crits as well. :)

Elana Roth, agent at and founder of Red Tree Literary, has offered her amazing expertise to Crits for Water next! She is offering to critique the first 1250 words of any young adult or middle grade manuscript for one winner. Elana has amazing taste (she represents Justina, for example, whose auction is running until the end of June 10th!), so head over to mycharitywater and enter! And if you don’t win, you’ll still receive a consolation Kat-Crit.

Entries will be accepted for this critique until June 12th at 11:59pm, Eastern Daylight Time.

  1. Go to http://mycharitywater.org/critsforwater2012
  2. Click on the “Donate” button and donate $5.
  3. Then in the comments section, please write in a way to contact you. You can use your email, twitter, or website. Anything’s cool, as long as you check it often :D For example:
  4. When you donate, mycharitywater will ask you to become a member (if you’re not already). That does NOT mean the donation didn’t go through! If in doubt, check your email/bank account before re-donating.
  5. I will use random.org to pick the raffle winner June 13th
  6. Anyone who does not win the raffle will receive a consolation Kat-Crit.

This is a little complicated, so please, if you have any questions, use the comment section below! And thank you so much!

About Elana:

Elana Roth is a Brooklyn-based creative type, specifically of the word variety. After 4 years of agenting at other people’s companies, she opened Red Tree Literary to continue working with a select list of children’s and young adult authors on her own.

How she fell in love with children’s content is a long story that begins by sheer dumb luck with an internship at Nickelodeon Magazine. Books followed when she began working as an editor at Parachute Publishing, where she spent 5 years learning the publishing ropes on series for kids of all ages (and that includes some adults). She switched to agenting in 2008.

Educationally, Elana is a graduate of Barnard College and the Jewish Theological Seminary, where she earned degrees in English literature and Bible. Surprisingly, it’s that second degree which comes more in handy when trying to make conversation at cocktail parties.

Posted on June 10, 2012 in 2012 Crits, Finished · Comments { 2 }